Farewell..

Nesto sto sam odavno napisao. Svi cete verujem prepoznati posvetu i kome je upucena, ali nemojte komentarisati na tom osnovu nista.
Ima gramatickih gresaka i par stvari koje bih sada ispravio ali je ipak neka u ovom "izvornom" obliku.


Farewell..

I don't have the strength to carry on,
Without you by my side.
Only meaning of my life
Was to make you forever mine!

Read this song I wrote for you,
And remember times we knew.
All the stuff I did for you,
Were because I loved you true.

Now my heart is bleeding black!
Our story ends and no one gain.
Those times never will come back,
Emotionally dead again!

Feel these words I wrote for you,
I just need one more kiss, or few.
All those nights I've spent with you
Were because I loved you true.

Now my end is coming near.
I know you won't gush in tears.
Still, You, will always be the one, my dear
For which I lived for all these years!

Now burn this song I wrote for you,
And please forget you ever knew.
That boy who would die for you
And who'll forever love you true.

 

[aka973]

savšeno..iako je mračna..nekako si kao Bodler
..evo ja je nisam spalila već sam je oslikala..ne baš najbolje

 

[lejla.al.dbuni]

I like it... nice.

 

[WinteRborN]

Wow, aka973, mislim da je ovo do sada najlepsa vrsta komentara koju dobih za nesto sto sam napisao Hvala tebi! Svidja mi se cak i slika koju si izabrala za podlogu!

@ lejla.al.dbuni: Super sto ti se svidja! I ja cesto blejim na tvog blogu

 

[Emin@]

Pa je ne znam o kome se radi.Ali znam da je pesma inzvaredna. Teska,jaka i ostavlja utisak. Znala sam da dobro pises.


The best!